And I Darken (The Conqueror’s Saga #1)

And I Darken (The Conqueror's Saga, #1)And I Darken by Kiersten White
My rating: 3 of 5 stars

Author: Kiersten White
Genre: YA
Publisher: Delacorte Press
Year of Publication: 2016

Main Character: Lada—(3/5) She started out as an impressive (somewhat terrifying) heroine. Unfortunately, she got a little lost and I stopped agreeing with her choices. Radu—(4/5) Surprisingly, half of the book is written from his perspective. I sure didn’t mind, as he was more realistic and relatable than his sister, and his choices were wiser.
Secondary Characters: The secondary characters were highly distinct and multi-faceted, as would be expected from a book this complex. And then Mehmed….I’m kind of ambivalent about him. As a young boy, I thought he was sad and lonely, so when he and the siblings developed a charming bond, I was all for it. As they all aged and both siblings became obsessed with Mehmed to the point of abandoning their own goals to stay at his side, I found myself resenting him. Lada and Radu have too much potential to squander their lives fighting each other for a place in Mehmed’s bed (which is apparently somewhere every woman has been. EW!).
Pacing: This book was long and complex. All the same, everything White included served a purpose, which was what kept me engaged.
Accuracy of Publisher’s Synopsis: Misleading, but not inaccurate. Most synopses only focus on the first third or so of the book, but this one skipped the entire setup of the plot. I spent two hundred frustrating pages reading about Lada and Radu as children and wondering when I would hit the main action.
Resolution: I suppose it’s a good starting point for the next installment, but I have to say I was a little disappointed in Lada. She wasted years that could have been spent achieving her own goals instead developing her relationship with Mehmed and sacrificing for him. Then when she finally gets the opportunity to reap the benefits of her new life, to be powerful and rule beside a man who would do anything for her…she does the dumbest thing she ever could and throws that away, too. So now she’s no longer safe or secure and she has abandoned her family. Just when she starts to see the value in moving forward with the new life she chose, she decides to go back to the old one that doesn’t want her.

The Good: Although this book was long, every event had meaning to it. There was no point when I simply wanted to throw the book across the room screaming about senseless chapters filled with unnecessary narration. Every character was important, each act had a consequence, and everything came full circle. I can’t say much bad about this book because the aspects I disliked had more to do with the premise than the plot or the characters. The villains in the book were properly nefarious without being unrealistic; they were just selfish people who had too much power. As for the main characters, I so loved Radu and found both his struggle for purpose and his war against his nature to be heartbreaking and endearing. Lada was fierce, but we got to see the doubt and fear underneath it all. The siblings even managed to maintain their strong family bond in spite of their differences, and they sacrificed so much for each other. For people so young, they were tough and determined in a way most adults never are.

The Not So Good: I understand that the author wanted to retell history. However, when you can take liberties with the social and political realities that defined that time period, it becomes less authentic. Given that, a couple of aspects of Radu’s narrative bothered me because they simply seemed implausible. Firstly, given religious tensions at the time, I find it hard to believe that Radu would so easily be swayed to the faith of a country he grew up watching his family fighting against. I’m glad that Radu found it easy to settle into a different culture and that it gave him the sense of purpose he was missing, but I don’t see how it could have ever happened so quickly and willingly. I also question the prevalence of discussing homosexuality during the time. I doubt that Radu would have come across so many who shared in the same struggle as him and that they would actually admit it. But, I am willing to overlook those couple of confusing points, because there is one thing about this book that made me feel ill. Why on earth was a thirteen-year-old boy hanging around in a harem having sex? There is no explanation that will lessen the disgust I felt when reading about Mehmed and his many women. And the fact that he had two children with his concubines even though he had someone he actually loved within reach repulsed me. I felt terrible for Lada. It cost her so much to admit her love, even indirectly, and he was impregnating other women all the while. I hope things change, because I can’t root for a strong female character to end up with a misogynist.

Overall Impression: This book was complex and has the foundation for a popular series—the kind that gets adapted for a movie or TV show (which I would totally watch). The characters were well defined and resilient, while the plot was rife with shock and controversy. The amount of sacrifices made is not to be believed. I appreciate the historical aspects of the setting, but would like the characters and plot to stay truer to the time. There is so much potential for this series, if it’s played out strategically.

Would I recommend it? Tough question. I wouldn’t say that this book met my expectations. Most books that are this highly publicized are more compelling than this one. However, I do see potential for this series to grow, so I would have to say it depends on where White takes the story.

What I would like to see in the next installment:

1. I would like to avoid a love triangle between Lada, Mehmed, and basically any other character.
2. I really hope Radu either gets the attention he deserves from Mehmed or finds it elsewhere, preferably in someone trustworthy.
3. Lada better get a chance to prove herself on the battlefield. I didn’t spend so many pages reading about her arguing with every man for the right to fight just for her to never see a war.
4. Halil Pasha has to go. I don’t really care how or when, but I am so over him.
5. Radu and Lada need to find identities for themselves that are not derived directly from their relationships with Mehmed.
6. I don’t really want Mehmed to target Constantinople, but I also really would like to stop hearing about it. He either needs to let it go or get it done before the end of the next book.

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The Clearing

The ClearingThe Clearing by Heather Davis
My rating: 3 of 5 stars

3.5/5 stars
Author: Heather Davis
Genre: YA romance
Publisher: Houghton Mifflin Harcourt
Year of Publication: 2010

Main Character: Amy (I don’t recall her having a last name, actually.)
Secondary Characters: I liked the secondary characters well enough. They were all distinct and nicely developed.
Pacing: Average. It took a bit for the book to pull me in, but most are like that anyway.
Accuracy of Publisher’s Synopsis: Very accurate, except that the blurb on the copyright page states that Amy is sixteen, which is not very likely, as she’s in her senior year.
Resolution: I suppose that what happened was what was supposed to happen, but I still cried anyway. I’ve only cried over a couple of other books, so I wasn’t expecting that from this one. I only wish there had been a tad bit more to the last couple of pages. I wanted more closure, especially on Henry’s end.

The Good: This was such an unassuming book. I picked it up at a dollar store, and so I didn’t expect much. Once I got into the main action, I found myself pleasantly surprised. Davis started with a unique premise and created two compellingly real characters. Normally, I find the problems of main characters in YA to be trifling and their reactions to be dramatic, but this plot was much deeper. A story like Henry and Amy’s transcends time and place; they could have been any two people anywhere. There was just something so magical and special about this book. Henry’s family and their little pocket of summer were charming, even against the backdrop of World War II. I especially liked that the historical aspect enhanced, rather than overwhelmed, the main plotline. Davis didn’t overstep or try to make this book something it wasn’t meant to be. It is nearly perfect the way she wrote it. Amy’s experiences are realistic and relatable, while the lessons she learns have gravity. Henry’s struggle between family and fate is heartrending, but his ultimate decision offers him freedom from his guilt.

The Not-So Good: I didn’t care much for some of Amy’s friends in town, and I had no respect for her mother and Pete. What kind of parent moves states without their child, who is still a minor? *Spoiler Alert* I was so hoping that Henry would just beat the tar out of Matt when he showed up. That would have been satisfying. And Amy’s lack of memory about Henry in the last few pages broke my heart.* End Spoilers*

Overall Impression: This book is a succinct coming-of-age story with enough depth for readers of any age to enjoy. The burdens Amy and Henry bear are onerous, yet universal in nature. This book encourages strength of character and emphasizes the importance of pushing onward in spite of our misgivings and fears.

Would I recommend it? I would absolutely recommend this book. It is brimming with important topics such as recovering from abusive relationships, coping with moving on, accepting your fate, and allowing yourself to make the right choice despite the pain that comes with it.

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Witch’s Pyre (Worldwalker #3)

Witch's Pyre (Worldwalker, #3)Witch’s Pyre by Josephine Angelini
My rating: 2 of 5 stars

Author: Josephine Angelini
Genre: YA
Publisher: Feiwel and Friends
Year of Publication: 2016

Overall Series Rating: 3/5 The first book was the best, and I kept reading hoping the series would turn out as well as the first book. I’m sorry to say my hopes were too high.
Main Character: Lily—I started liking her again in this book. If I could change one thing about her, though, I would have her think things through a little more thoroughly.
Secondary Characters: Toshi was the only secondary character I truly liked in this book, and that includes the characters from the previous two books.
Pacing: This one was kind of slow. The plot and the idea were actually perfect, but I feel like it could have been developed better. A good portion of the book could have been condensed without losing anything vital.
Accuracy of Publisher’s Synopsis: The inside cover gives such a vague idea of what the book is actually about. The part about Lillian’s way being the only way is not true at all.
Resolution: The buildup to the battle was huge, but when the main action finally came, it was disjointed and vague. I needed a little more to the end of the book than just Lily walking into Bower City. For instance, which world did Samantha and Juliet end up staying in? What happened to everyone in Bower City, especially Toshi’s family? Did the tunnel people and the Outlanders stay in the west? And where did the Hive go? I could have used another chapter to wrap all that up.

The Good: We actually got to the battle I’ve been waiting for! Finally, the mystery of the Woven was solved and Lily risked losing her entire coven and the war against Grace to do things the right way, distinguishing herself from Lillian. I appreciated that it was not an easy road, even though some of the problems faced were a little petty and could have been avoided. Rowan and Lily made up, albeit in the last chapter with very little exchange between them, but they did it. It only happened after Tristan shared a memory from Lily’s Tristan about what really happened when they rescued Lily from the Outlanders. And at long last, Rowan and Lillian were face to face! They finally got to discuss Rowan’s father and her reasoning for hanging him. However, I didn’t get the reaction from Rowan I was hoping for. I mean…I technically got everything I wanted, but it still somehow felt like a letdown, which I don’t understand.

The Bad: All of the inconsistencies that were just annoying in the first book were magnified in this book. It was exhausting to keep up with all of the new rules that Angelini seemed to devise on the fly. *Spoiler Alert* When was it ever stated that when a witch dies, she explodes and all of her claimed die with her? I feel like that was something that could have been explained more than a paragraph before Lillian went up in a giant fireball. * End Spoiler Alert* I think my phobia of bees really did me a disservice in reading this last book. Just reading about the Hive attaching themselves to people constantly was enough to make my skin crawl. Also, I got annoyed with Lily’s claimed being so up in arms about being possessed. It wasn’t like Lily did it maliciously; she was trying to save their lives. But even until the end, I found my interest wavering. I actually set the book down with fifteen pages to go and didn’t pick it up again until the next night.

Overall Impression: I just can’t say that this book was as good as the first one, although it was a little more interesting than the second. It was disorganized to a distracting level and less pleasurable to read. In essence, everything ended as it should have, but the execution of every plot point was lacking excitement and frankly, befuddling.

Would I recommend this series? I wouldn’t tell anyone not to read it…but I wouldn’t tell anyone to run out and buy all the books.

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The Candidates

The Candidates (Delcroix Academy, #1)The Candidates by Inara Scott
My rating: 2 of 5 stars

Author: Inara Scott
Genre: YA
Publisher: Hyperion
Year of Publication: 2010

Main Character: Dancia—3/5. She wasn’t a bad main character, but I didn’t necessarily connect with her. It happens.
Secondary Characters: Decent. Her friends all have unique personalities. The guys she likes are just different enough from each other for it to work (and they seem more mature than their ages).
Pacing: This book was a little slower than average. I feel like a moderate amount of the plot and writing could have been cut and the flow would have been more captivating.
Accuracy of Publisher’s Synopsis: The synopsis is accurate, but it gives off a completely different vibe from the book. The novel itself is a lot less mysterious and involves very little demonstration of Dancia’s power.
Resolution: Something about this ending just rubbed me the wrong way. I didn’t care for how abrupt it was. There wasn’t much transition from the rising action to the end. I felt like everything ended up like it was supposed to, but the road to get there was anticlimactic.

The Good: The characters are all interesting and developed for this type of plot. I liked Dancia learning to navigate new friendships and learn about herself. There was nothing necessarily wrong with the book, but it lacked that special x factor. Dancia’s power was pretty interesting and useful, although she only used it a few times in the book; I had thought her power would be a major factor. I really liked Esther and Hennie; I found them to be incredibly good friends for Dancia and I’m so glad they stayed supportive of her struggles. I also really liked Dancia’s grandma—she gave some solid advice and not much escaped her notice.

The Bad: I was expecting the plot to be a lot more about Dancia’s powers and her investigating the school’s nefarious intentions, so it was kind of a letdown that it was more about her developing relationships with other people. On a side note, of the three important people, they were all parentless in some way or other and had less than stellar upbringings; that made it really easy to confuse their stories. I had assumed that everyone at the school would have similar abilities, but most didn’t, which was really confusing and misleading. I feel like the author should have added more about the magical aspect and cut some of the events from the beginning to move up the part where Jack actually has something to support his theory. The villains themselves weren’t consistent at all in their malevolence. In fact, they stayed nameless and faceless the entire book and I’m not sure if they were supposed to be villains or what…. And not to spoil anything, but there was a loose end involving some stolen books and we never learned what information was in them.

Overall Impression: I purchased this book years ago expecting the classic Harry Potter–esque story about a girl getting whisked away to a mysterious school to learn about her power. What I got was a big letdown in that department, but the author somehow managed to create interesting characters anyway. They were pretty much the only reason I continued reading once I figured out I wasn’t going to get what I wanted from this book.

Would I recommend it? I wouldn’t go out of my way to tell someone about it, but I wouldn’t tell anyone not to read it.

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Firewalker (Worldwalker #2)

Firewalker (Worldwalker, #2)Firewalker by Josephine Angelini
My rating: 3 of 5 stars

Author:Josephine Angelini
Genre:YA
Publisher:Feiwel & Friends
Year of Publication:2015

Main Character: Lily. I liked her less in this book, but she wasn’t completely unlikable.
Secondary Characters: The secondary characters in this were not as well developed. I get that Angelini had a different agenda with this book. Her focus was on everyone understanding Lillian and…Carrick. Why do I need to understand a psychotic torture-loving creep?
Pacing: Slower than average. The first portion of the book was unnecessarily boring. They spent so much time hemming and hawing over details that end up not mattering because everyone just runs back to magical atomic bomb land again!
Accuracy of Publisher’s Synopsis: The synopsis makes it seem like Rowan and Lily spend a long, happy time in Lily’s universe. In reality, it’s probably only a third of the book, which is a lot more about Lily claiming a handful of people, since apparently magic works in Lily’s world. Strange that nobody there uses it besides her….
Resolution: Aside from a character death I didn’t see the purpose of, I am intrigued by the way Angelini left off. It kind of seems impossible, and that’s what makes it so interesting.

The Good: There wasn’t anything particularly good about this book, but it wasn’t all bad either. I liked that Rowan got to live in Lily’s world for a little to learn more about her and that everyone established that Samantha’s issue was not simply mental illness. More than anything, Lily’s insistence upon studying the Woven piqued my curiosity. I feel like there’s something that ties the Woven to the witches who created them, but we’ll see. I think they’re more like tortured souls than pure monsters. I know we’ll solve that puzzle in the next book, so I’m excited. I also kind of liked how Lily ruined Alaric’s plans to radiate the whole East Coast. Shouldn’t the “scientists” understand that it’s not a contained weapon and you can’t punish only the cities without wiping out the nearby Outlanders?

The Bad: This was more of a “sophomore slump.” The way that everything around Lily falls apart and she makes choices out of desperation that she should have taken more time to consider brought back my nightmares about New Moon. Not only does Lily spend a little too much time with Lillian in her head, but she keeps it a secret. However, it isn’t only the knowledge she gains from delving into Lillian’s memories that strains her relationships with literally everyone. Lily’s problem arises as a product of her terror at understanding Lillian’s actions. That’s completely understandable; it would freak me out to get in the head of a monster and actually agree with their motives. But the girl needs to learn how to be a little more diplomatic. You can’t attack people you need or people who can hurt you and then expect it to go well. Of course it’s only after they are about to face life and death that Lily starts to realize that she is really not like Lillian because her choices are completely different. Other than that, I feel like this book had a lot of filler. Lily spent the first like hundred pages of the book helplessly nursing her burns while Rowan did everything for her entire family.

Overall Impression: This one can’t hold a candle to the magic of the first book, but the ending was just enough to make me commit to reading the third one. I stuck it out despite my misgivings and I feel like Angelini owes everyone a happy ending to this series after the torture I lived through Lily.

Would I recommend it? That entirely depends on how the third book goes. After this one, I’m skeptical, but the setup for the next book restored some of my faith.

What I need to see from the final book:

1. Lily needs to chill out and realize that she has no reason to feel guilty about Rowan’s father and just show him Lillian’s memory of the barn already. I’m hoping Rowan can live up to the man he was in the first book.
2. Lillian has got to die already. Lily is so preoccupied with not being Lillian that she can never become her own person if Lillian is still influencing her.
3. Everybody just pick a world and stay there.
4. I hope Alaric gets what’s coming to him. He pretends to be the good guy when really he’s just going to kill everyone.
5. Peace with the Woven. For all her talk about figuring them out, I really hope Lily follows through.

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Love & Gelato

Love & GelatoLove & Gelato by Jenna Evans Welch
My rating: 2 of 5 stars

Author: Jenna Evans Welch
Genre:YA
Publisher: Simon Pulse
Year of Publication:2016

Main Character: Lina—2/5. Yikes, this girl needs some maturity.
Secondary Characters: The secondary characters were pretty good people, but none of them really had flaws. Kind of unrealistic, but I’ll still take it.
Pacing: The sassy main character (at least narratively) made the novel entertaining in spots, but half of the book I felt like the story was dragging.
Accuracy of Publisher’s Synopsis: After reading the book, it’s actually entirely inaccurate, but there’s no way to describe how it’s inaccurate without spoiling the entire book. However, the premise is also misleading. I didn’t know that Lina was going to Italy against her will.
Resolution: This one ended how it should have, but just barely. The rising action was heavy and I felt like the grand finale didn’t balance it out.

The Good: I haven’t read many YA books that were set abroad, so I really appreciated Welch’s firsthand knowledge about Italy and its history. Also, I got to learn a little Italian! Although I did have to keep an Internet tab open to a translator to figure out what it meant. The next best thing about this book was Lina’s relationship with Ren. It was cute, although strained at some points due to Lina’s lack of social intelligence. But overall, his affection for her was touching and I liked the influence he had on her.

The Bad: Lina, although bright and brave, has some growing up to do. I realize that she’s only sixteen, but I had a hard time believing she could stand up for herself to keep the people who love her at arm’s length, yet was incapable of defending her mother’s honor. If someone had said to me some of the things people said to Lina about her deceased mother, they would rue the day. The thing that truly bothers me is how rude and disrespectful Lina is to Sonia and Howard. If someone close to you passes, you would normally be grateful to meet someone who knew them and spoke highly of them. And if that person had mementos of them, I think most people would be interested in them. Lina did not handle these situations gracefully. But the biggest confusion for me lies in how a minor who has no legal father and is therefore basically an orphan is allowed to reside in and enroll in school in a foreign country under the guardianship of strangers.

Overall Impression: Once in possession of her mother’s journal, Lina’s entire mission is to learn about her mother’s life in Italy, which is in direct contrast to her initial reluctance to be in Italy at all or spend time with Howard. She becomes increasingly obsessed with discovering why her mother left Italy (although she never seemed curious while her mother was alive). The best feature of this book is the puppy love story between Lina and Ren. The rest of the book is interesting, but somewhat far-fetched.

Would I recommend it? I might recommend it to someone just for the intrigue of learning about Italy.

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Trial by Fire (Worldwalker #1)

Trial by Fire (Worldwalker, #1)Trial by Fire by Josephine Angelini
My rating: 4 of 5 stars

Author:Josephine Angelini
Genre:YA
Publisher: Feiwel & Friends
Year of Publication: 2014

Main Character: Lily—4.5/5. I admired Lily. She was a little annoying about her diet and her stances on science and nuclear power, but I forgave that in favor of her better qualities. She was exactly what I wanted from a good heroine: spirited, brave, and strong enough to overcome her weaknesses.
Secondary Characters: I was totally in love with the secondary characters Angelini created. They had distinctive personalities without drawing the focus from Lily. Juliet was such a sweet, caring person that I wish I could pull her out of her universe and into mine. And Rowan….Rowan speaks for himself.
Pacing: The pacing on this one fluctuated, especially at the beginning.
Accuracy of Publisher’s Synopsis: It was pretty accurate.
Resolution: The resolution here was kind of a sudden development. All of the sudden, they were going into a battle with no warning and hardly any precedent. Overall, it made sense, but I wanted some form of buildup to it and I wondered why there hadn’t been any.

The Good: Angelini put some serious thought into how magic could possibly exist and where the power would come from (though it was a bit much to go into such detail about it). I didn’t like the presence of the Woven, but they were appropriately terrifying. I also really enjoyed the fact that magic was based on the principles of the very subject Lillian hated. Now let’s get to the part that really made the book: Rowan. Lily and Rowan’s relationship is not necessarily traditional. He used to be in love with Lillian, Lily’s self in the alternate universe she is now stuck in. (Even weak and bedridden, Lillian makes a decent enough villain.) Rowan had to overcome a lot of pain to accept his feelings for Lily because of his unfortunate past with Lillian. And I adored him for it. Well, if I’m being honest, I adore him for a lot more than just that. He’s a strong, intelligent, brave hero. Lily is strong-minded and no stranger to struggle, so only someone really capable could make a good match for her. Rowan just happens to be it.

The Bad: I can’t help but think that Lily just having a natural propensity for magic is taking it a bit too far. If she’s really a crucible, then why was she born in a world without magic? Are all people who have allergies actually crucibles? I don’t think Angelini thought that part through. If Lily can use magic in Lillian’s world, why can’t she use it in her own? Can she use it in her own world? It’s just too confusing. And what happened with Gideon in the end was anticlimactic. Had I not been reading thoroughly, I might have missed it entirely.

Overall Impression: I enjoyed this book. The world and concept were pretty unique. I really liked the main characters. Lily was a great heroine and Rowan was nearly perfect; together, they were dynamite. Also, they weren’t perfect people. They both had flaws and worked through them for each other. If not for the fact that the logistics of this world are a bit farfetched and disjointed, I would have had no problems.

Would I recommend it? I think I’m keeping this one. But if the rest of the series disappoints me, I will probably give it up and pretend it never happened.

What I want to see in the next book:

1. Lillian, please explain your maniacal behavior. I would really like to believe there’s a good reason for putting half of your citizens on death row.
2. So Samantha isn’t crazy after all. I would love to find out what she actually knows. Can she help them figure it all out?
3. I really want to see how Tristan reacts to Lily.
4. I need to know more about the magic and how much more Lily has to learn.
5. Rowan and Lily better stay together. I won’t have a repeat of that New Moon garbage in another series.
6. Will Lily be able to use her magic in other worlds? If so, that’s kind of annoying, because she could have been using it all along if it was that easy to learn.

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